Question by Dave G: Could someone who speaks English as their first language edit this short text?
Hi,
I want to put the text below on my website. Is there any problem with it?
Take into consideration, the word “Review” is used as a Linking phrase to other pages. In other words, when clicking mentioned word, visitors would be led to other pages.
In advance, thank you for your time.
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Review Top 3 Services for hosting Personal websites ( All noncommercial sites).
Review Top 3 Services for hosting E-commerce websites.
Review the Best Personal Web Hosting of 2008.
Review the Best E-commerce Web Hosting of 2008.
Best answer:
Answer by Fabiola M
It looks pretty good to me and I’m a grammar freak.
What do you think? Answer below!
Click on the link, “Review”, in order to view other pages.
Very well done, for a non-native speaker. Even for a native one!!! lol
I would throw “the” out though. Looks better this way:
Review Best Personal Web Hosting of 2008.
Review Best E-commerce Web Hosting of 2008.
go with mike’s answer. other than that, perfect. better than i could do